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My poison

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Literature Text

From the moment I saw you, I was stricken
A tingling chill rushed down my spine
When you approached and first spoke,
I was stupid with awe, and stuttered.
The very air around you is lighter
And the scent you carry so sweet.
I secretly admire everything about you
And silently wish you were mine.
I promised myself the next time
I have the very rare privledge of
Speaking to you angel, I would say:

"When you get close to me, I cant breathe
Because my lungs constrict and give out.
The way you smell, is like a poison to my system,
A drug that I cant get enough of.
When you speak, its like when lightening
Strikes sand and produces flawless crystal.
A beautiful and priceless creation to me.
I'd tell you that if you were mine,
I'd give you every posession, and that
Every nook and cranny in my heart belongs to you,
And only you."

The ball is in your court love,
And I patiently and eagerly await your response.
Hm just something that came to me tonight. C&C's apprciated!
© 2009 - 2024 Viperluv18
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goooingcrrrazy's avatar
I liked this alot, cuz i feel like a lot of people can relate to the emotions you brought out in the poem. I especially liked the line,
"A beautiful and priceless creation to me.
I'd tell you that if you were mine,
I'd give you every posession, and that
Every nook and cranny in my heart belongs to you,
And only you."
I liked those lines because someones gotta break the ice sometime , just make sure its at the right time..lol. or else things could take a turn for the worse, even if the feelings are mutual. Just a little experience I've dealt with . lol but otherwise GREAT JOB!!